I followed the podcast with great interest so I'm really glad I can finally get the full game! It looks like a cute little game perfect for a Halloween one-shot.
By the way, did you use a particular template for the page layout? It's simple but really pretty, and I like how the dark pages stand out from the rest!
While scrolling through it, I noticed a few typos: - on page 8, "role" should be "roll" - on page 14, "ostume" should be "costume" - on page 15 "thrall" should be capitalized - on page 16 and 17, the final sentences of the mixed success and failure texts are missing a period. - on page 20, I don't think "loose-action" needs a dash. - on page 22, "Hallowe'en" doesn't need the apostrophe. - on page 29, "roll's" has a weird upside-down apostrophe (I'm probably the only one bothered by this, lol)
Hey I'm so glad you're a fan of the show! I'm excited to get releasing the second season soon which tells the story of how it got ready for release :) I designed the layout myself, but it was based off the Explorer's Design template you can find over on https://www.explorersdesign.com/
Thanks for letting me know about those typos! I'm collecting the bugs at the moment, and will be releasing a fixed edition closer to Halloween once I've had a chance to really go through it! Really appreciate it though!
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I followed the podcast with great interest so I'm really glad I can finally get the full game! It looks like a cute little game perfect for a Halloween one-shot.
By the way, did you use a particular template for the page layout? It's simple but really pretty, and I like how the dark pages stand out from the rest!
While scrolling through it, I noticed a few typos:- on page 8, "role" should be "roll"
- on page 14, "ostume" should be "costume"
- on page 15 "thrall" should be capitalized
- on page 16 and 17, the final sentences of the mixed success and failure texts are missing a period.
- on page 20, I don't think "loose-action" needs a dash.
- on page 22, "Hallowe'en" doesn't need the apostrophe.
- on page 29, "roll's" has a weird upside-down apostrophe (I'm probably the only one bothered by this, lol)
Hey I'm so glad you're a fan of the show! I'm excited to get releasing the second season soon which tells the story of how it got ready for release :) I designed the layout myself, but it was based off the Explorer's Design template you can find over on https://www.explorersdesign.com/
Thanks for letting me know about those typos! I'm collecting the bugs at the moment, and will be releasing a fixed edition closer to Halloween once I've had a chance to really go through it! Really appreciate it though!